Time

Time Foolishly I thought There was never a need to save it No reason to cherish it Time is all we have But time can never be replace If I only knew time wasn't on our side I would have stopped to enjoy time Before time ran out I would've made some time All the times If I only knew time wasn't on our side I would've reached out and grab hold of time And held on before time slipped away I would've said l love 1000 more times Before our time was no more If I only knew time wasn't on our side I would've made time When there was no time Time after time I would've loved you more Before time was stolen If I only knew time wasn't on our side So now I stand here in the mean time Hoping for better times Wishing for more time But ever so thankful for our time While time was on our side

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Skat A

Date: 6/16/2016 2:27:00 PM

TW,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/3/2015 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations TW.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/29/2015 10:42:00 PM

Congrats on ur lovely win TW with this great write!

Skat A

Date: 11/29/2015 3:39:00 PM

TW, Congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2015 11:05:00 PM

TW Harris, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/15/2015 12:44:00 PM

Hi TW, this is such an excellent first posted piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 11/13/2015 8:23:00 PM

TW, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"