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springtime when nature comes alive... one butterfly lands summertime heat bears down hard.. flowers wilt autumn earth prepares for rest... leaves' color appears winter chills the earth... bare limbs coated white buried deep roots, grubs, eggs, seeds... await

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Date: 7/27/2015 11:08:00 AM
Sara, this haiku considering seasonal rotation is lovely ~ Delice
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Date: 7/25/2015 7:59:00 AM
A lovely haiku cycle, Sara! From spring to winter, while new life awaits its turn. // paul
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:41:00 AM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 7/21/2015 4:03:00 PM
You cover all the four seasons so well, just love the visual aspect of these...
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:10:00 PM
Oh, I really like this, Sara! Your beautiful haikus describe the different seasons so very well, a 7 from me :)
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Date: 7/21/2015 2:42:00 PM
You are in a seasonal mood, Sara. My favorite of all is that last one. the one word "await" was so appealing to me for the topic!
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Date: 7/21/2015 2:00:00 PM
The seasons covered beautifully within this short Haiku Set, nice one Sara, smiles, James :) :)
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:44:00 PM
Sara, a lovely series, beautifully penned 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark purple poetry
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:25:00 PM
your seasons paint lovely scenes unique in their cyclical spheres... utterly splendid, sara.. huggs
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:19:00 PM
A perfect description of all seasons. Excellent and a well-deserved 7+!
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:52:00 PM
I wish to live within this time frame...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 7/20/2015 12:01:00 PM
Lovely string of haiku that paint an awesome picture! Thanks for this pleasurable piece! All the best. Pandita
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:24:00 AM
a beautiful string of haiku Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:08:00 AM
- A beautiful years, both in color and picture Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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