Time

TIME run off grain by grain birth to death I spend my life treasure of breaths leave imprints on grains of sand “spend life well and cherish yonder’’ By Mohan Chutani on 1.6.2014 for contest CREATE YOUR PYRAMID sponsored by nette onclaud in the prescribed format

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2014 3:53:00 PM

astounding thoughts about time's mortality or infinity, mohan...belated congrats on your fine win in my contest.. huggs

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/16/2014 8:56:00 PM

Thanx Nette. grateful for your selection and want to congratulate you as you set us a very imaginative task and made us think deep. Mohan

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2014 8:31:00 AM

I agree with Andrea, that is my favorite line as well.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/14/2014 9:23:00 AM

Thanks Richard, for your visit. It is very difficult to leave a mark on grains of sand. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2014 12:21:00 AM

I love that line about leaving imprints on grains of sand. Congrats for your win with this fine poem.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/12/2014 1:28:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for encouragement. Mohan

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2014 11:12:00 PM

Mohan, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/12/2014 1:27:00 AM

Skat, Thanks for encouragements and visit again. Mohan

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2014 3:48:00 PM

I love this one Mohan.....'grain by grain'....birth to death I spend.." compelling words !!! Nicely written,...a big congratulations!!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2014 6:44:00 PM

thanks Carrie, for your nice encouragement. Pl. keep visiting. Mohan

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/11/2014 2:41:00 PM

Mohan...like this one very much. Congratulations!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2014 6:46:00 PM

Thank you Faye for visiting again and enjoying and encouraging. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/11/2014 2:04:00 PM

Mohan, congratulations to you on another fine win - well done, my friend!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2014 6:48:00 PM

Thankyou Pandita, I cherish your encouragements. Mohan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 9:49:00 AM

Hi Mohan, thank you for visiting my blog.. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2014 6:50:00 PM

Thank you Linda, I made a quick attempt to enter your new contest. Pl. visit in your own time. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/11/2014 6:39:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Mohan

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2014 6:59:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram once again. Mohan

Paul Callus

Date: 6/11/2014 4:51:00 AM

Congratulations, Mohan. You did very well with this pyramid. I love the second stanza. // paul

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2014 5:18:00 AM

Thank you Paul for your encouragement. And congratulations for your top win on own Time pyramid. Best. Mohan

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/11/2014 4:09:00 AM

well done Mohan ...Seren

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2014 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Seren for your encouragement. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/11/2014 3:42:00 AM

:) great one indeed :) congratulations.. :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/11/2014 7:00:00 AM

Olive, thanks, my friend. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2014 8:49:00 PM

this is really nice. I like how you related it to yourself.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/2/2014 5:06:00 AM

Thankyou Andrea, the topic set by nette itself was a bit of a challenge. 'I" can be anyone. Mohan

Diane Christian

Date: 6/1/2014 4:45:00 PM

lovely poem nice pyramid

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/2/2014 5:14:00 AM

Thanx Diane. Mohan