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. . . . TIME trickles eternal . . . . the sand of time drips like a flowing river precious moments to treasure "endless is life's hourglass falling . . . . ." _____________________________________ May 31, 2014 Poetry/Verse/Pyramid Form/TIME Copyright Protected, ID 05-571-131-31 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Pyramid, sponsor, Nette Onclaud, Judged 06/2014 Fourth Place

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2014 3:29:00 PM

as always, your imagery is impactful, dear cinstance.. belated congrats on your fine win in my challenge.. huggs

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2014 4:09:00 PM

Thank you nette

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2014 8:14:00 AM

I like this crooked pyramid, congratulations for doing something different.

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2014 4:10:00 PM

Thank you Richard

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/12/2014 8:32:00 PM

Great job! I loved the Endless is life's hourglass falling-fabulous ending line :)

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2014 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Casarah

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2014 12:09:00 AM

Dear heart, this is a gem!! It's always so good to see you on a winner list. I miss the days I saw you here more often. Hope life is treating you good and congrats on this win.

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2014 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Andrea