Time

Some days seem endless The clock ticks on the wall Hours number as many As stars doomed to fall Before you realize Life is short after all Time no longer stands still And death comes to call ©Donna Jones For boomerang contest, written 2-11-13

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2014 7:11:00 AM

The closer one gets the faster it seemed to go but the good part is death is just the beginning..Thanks for stopping by..Great job on this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/13/2013 10:20:00 AM

really good write Donna, a joy to read it. its a thing that never stops no matter how we try to slow it down! Have a blessed day, Gordon

John Posey

Date: 3/23/2013 6:13:00 PM

Great wisdom show here, Donna. I wrote one some time ago. You might enjoy "Time Goes Marching On" in my portfolio.....Love Ya..... Jake

Donna Jones
Date: 3/23/2013 7:01:00 PM

Thanks John I will go check it out....:-)

David Scott

Date: 3/1/2013 11:33:00 AM

LIKE THIS REMINDS ME OF MY LIFES JOURNEY POEM AS i NOTICED YOU COMENETED ON THANKS MATE FOR COMENTS HOW YOU WELL XX DAVIDSCOTT

Donna Jones
Date: 3/1/2013 12:23:00 PM

Very welcome ...i also appreciate you stopping by, blessings

Skat A

Date: 2/25/2013 7:15:00 PM

Hi DOnna' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

Donna Jones
Date: 2/25/2013 9:04:00 PM

A very surprising placing here to me but thanks....you also take care...later

Joseph May

Date: 2/20/2013 6:20:00 PM

congrats on your win Donna

Donna Jones
Date: 2/20/2013 9:27:00 PM

Thanks!!!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/20/2013 1:44:00 AM

Many Congratulations on your win Donna luv xx

Donna Jones
Date: 2/20/2013 12:06:00 PM

Muuuuuchhh appreciate your reading and stopping by...thanks Mandy...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/19/2013 6:37:00 PM

Congrad's Light & Love Always

Donna Jones
Date: 2/19/2013 6:52:00 PM

Thanks Debbie...nice to see you....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2013 4:24:00 PM

Donna, love your winning poem in Michael's "boomerang contest" always & forever :-) LINDA

Donna Jones
Date: 2/19/2013 5:43:00 PM

Thanks........never expected it.....though

Juanita Thorn

Date: 2/13/2013 4:23:00 AM

Awesome!!!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/13/2013 10:33:00 AM

Life on earth is too short to not follow your own heart

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/11/2013 12:59:00 PM

Donna I love the take for the boomerang contest. I agree with the words of time. You never know when your times is up. Good luck in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

Donna Jones
Date: 2/11/2013 2:38:00 PM

Thanks so much....I don't really know if I grasp the whole concept of that contest...just entering for fun...the poem does have personal meaning to me though....blessings

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/11/2013 11:24:00 AM

Wow, this had a very powerful message within it my friend! I loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon, a masterful piece! What a glorious write, Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/11/2013 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Russell...it has very personal meaning to me....thanks for stopping by...blessings as always friend

Mark Goodson

Date: 2/11/2013 9:32:00 AM

In my mind I am 18, but my body doest not allow such nonsence. Enjoyed this poem. Good luck in the contest.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/11/2013 9:52:00 AM

Great for you an inspiration for us all... I've learned to live more this way and have less regrets also! I appreciate you stopping by....really....and your wonderful comments