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Tilted Thoughts

Love from Adam at Eden's shore The dark nobles tailing my feet- Our deeds rhyme, but thoughts- doubts do greet 'Til we dock at the fateless shore Echoes would cease, as tears permit When rays grace my greys from Red core Now you're gone, your loss, I ignore One cross, three burdens, paths do split From holy clouds, I smiled in tears In harmony, we tackled fate Still ants preys our proud humble mate No peace in realms, bereft of fears Now you're gone, hades reflect my hate Yet stoic abode, grace secret rears A cold hut, muse of kindred pairs New glimpse; shadows of former Date Again! -this dark noble, again? My cross and his, a curse to tend salient smile, nemesis do bend Now we're here, on treasured terrain Grounds and walls, my presence do blend In days and nights, sun and rain Your cause -a curse, doubles my pain Sealed thoughts tilts with guilt of dumb end Tripple souls breathing with an heart To dine together, yet apart

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Date: 7/22/2013 3:10:00 PM
What gorgeous word/rhyme flow here. This feels like a mind bender fueled by a Fantasy setting, of sorts. Very well done!
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