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Till the Sun Don'T Shine

Now let me see, what's on my mind Is it still clicking along Will I get any kind of advance warning When I won't be singing life's song The lyrics will all seem foreign to me Start hitting some real sour notes Should I write down my name just in case I go out in the winter with no coat Sure can't imagine ending life this way After such a productive run But I must be ready for any eventuality In case I fall down on my bum My mind wanders back to all those years Was sharp as the proverbial tack Riding the wave of a productive good life Till age kinda changed all that Well thankfully that's all still in the future Best take each new day as it comes Till that day when my sun no longer shines Gonna keep on beating life's drum © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 7/19/2015 11:22:00 PM
Keep drumming, love! This one's fantastic. Your sun will always shine on, long after you are passed. We will make sure of that! Always, Laura
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Date: 7/15/2015 11:12:00 AM
When's your birthday, Santa?
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/15/2015 8:40:00 PM
August 11th... money is good! LOL Love, Santa xxx
Date: 7/15/2015 11:07:00 AM
Hubby, Dragon, Grandpa Troll, and I Check you and John out first... then Tim. Don't worry about the future. Spend your time enjoying each moment- NOW! My Dad had Cancer at 81... and beat it. August 31st he'll be 84... and is still riding his Harley Davidson into the mountains, from Sun City, Arizona, twice a week... Alone. He calls me every day and is a sharp as a tack. So don't give up... before you have too... Actually his health is better than mine... Sic Em! Never give up! Never surrender.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/15/2015 8:43:00 PM
We got a great little group going here don't we!!! Does that mean we're "groupies"? Your dad is my hero and I imagine yours too! I bow to Sir Harley! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 7/14/2015 3:51:00 PM
keep marching them out my friend and don't pay any attention to the man down below : )
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/15/2015 6:28:00 AM
"the man down below"!!! LOL
Date: 7/14/2015 12:56:00 PM
Hmmn...your writes of late seem to have diversified as well, eh Jack? But I like this...and I like the limericks too...so ok you gotta keep on beating life's drum...hugssssss
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/14/2015 1:12:00 PM
Been in more of a pensive mood as my 80th looms just around the corner! But I have all you sweet friends to buoy my spirits! You give me life! Thank you, my dear sweet Kimmie! Love, Jack xxxxx

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