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Till Reason Intervened

I had nearly touched the spire Wherein reason intervened-- And labeled hope a liar, So the council then convened. But the quorum in its meeting Felt discourse a useless thing, For hope is always fleeting... Even with the slightest wing. ~Mel

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/9/2014 7:04:00 PM

i am so proud of myself for recognizing the nod to dickinson in this brilliant piece (thanks to your reply to eileen). it is absolutely masterful!

Mel Merrill
Date: 8/10/2014 8:04:00 PM

Why thank you, ilene! Kind of you, and encouraging. Emily is a distant cousin, and how distant is obvious from a comparison of her works, to mine. She does fascinate me, though, and is my favorite poet--poetess? Thanks again, and have a great week...xxx...Mel

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 7:01:00 PM

I delightfully need my dictionary again sweetie, but I am happy to be schooled by your beautiful words xox

Casarah Nance
Date: 8/20/2014 10:13:00 PM

haha hey now that wasn't nice -impudent -disrespectful, shameless bold,. I do keep a dictionary handy.

Mel Merrill
Date: 8/10/2014 8:01:00 PM

Lol. Such an admission shows that you have character--or that you are a character? No matter, just keep a Thesaurus handy and you'll be good to go. Beautiful words? Okay, I'll accept that...Webster's finest :) Love to you and the kid, who is as impudent as you (look it up).

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/9/2014 5:29:00 PM

Mel...you just know how to maneuver those words oh so cleverly. Don't let hope get away. Delightful piece.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/9/2014 5:51:00 PM

Awww...reading Dickinson, are we? :) Sweet. So far so good. Hope you have a great one too!

Mel Merrill
Date: 8/9/2014 5:49:00 PM

Thank you Eileen. I appreciate the visit and words of encouragement. I had just finished reading some Emily Dickinson, and she always inspires me. I hope you are well and happy--enjoying a nice weekend. Wishing you the best...xxx...Mel