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Till My Ticker Expires

Work seven till five To stay off the street. When I do overtime Come home dead on my feet. Seems month after month Can afford less to eat. When they raise my rent-- Could be out on the street. My car’s fairly new; Got a decent TV. My home has a view. The bank owns them, not me. I went back to school, Got another degree. Still work like a fool 'cause of the ‘conomy. Ain’t yet had a raise Since the day I was hired. Each check buys me less. Cost-of-living gets higher. My one biggest fear’s That I’ll never retire. I’ll be working somewhere ‘til my ticker expires. Ain’t yet had a raise. Come home dead on my feet. Each check buys me less-- Can afford less to eat. My one biggest fear, Since the day I was hired: I’ll be doin’ overtime Until my ticker expires.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/23/2014 3:08:00 AM
Hi, Mark. saw you are online and thought I'd read something of yours. I like this one a lot, can certainly relate and I'm sure many others can. I like the rhymes and the way it flows. Well done.... Robert.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/23/2014 3:50:00 PM
This was one of my bluesy songs. Thanks for commenting. My other better songs are Sitting On A Cloud, and Lady Luck Stomped Out. I'm probably goingto add verses to Egyptian Dancer too, but it is tricky as the rhythm is in 9/8.

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