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Till Morning Came

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He was the leading dancer till morning came with a willing partner, ne’er the same, savoured the rhythmic delight that flowed through the night while they danced till break of dawn to raw vibrations urgency of sensations as lost in passion she called his name. He was the leading dancer till morning came. ------------------------------------------------------ Contest: Any Poem #32 (mar 2015) Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placed 3rd

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/27/2017 8:50:00 PM

Paul, this poem so intrigues me.. beautifully expressed in rhythm, rhyme, imagery and intrigue; whose name did she call while lost in passion..? Maybe not his... The identical first and last lines can have two different meanings from the start to the end of your poem. Love the crossroads you present my ingenious friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 11/28/2017 3:09:00 PM

You leave no stone unturned, Susan!! The reader is free to draw his/her own conclusions. I like it when readers find themselves at a crossroads. Once again, thank you, not only for reading, but also for your insightful musing. ~ Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/13/2015 10:23:00 AM

Congratulation on a great win, dear Paul! Like your leading dancer, this magnificent piece showed-off lovely imagery, form, and beautiful flow. I thoroughly enjoyed the read! A-7 of course! Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus
Date: 8/13/2015 1:45:00 PM

Thank you Pandita! Your lovely feedback is a joy to read:) ... and the high rating is appreciated. Glad you enjoyed. ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/12/2015 2:06:00 AM

Wow a passionate write Paul, it perfectly rhymed in every way! Congrats on awesome win!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/12/2015 10:32:00 AM

A passionate wow is very uplifting, Upma:) Thank you! Hope you're keeping well:) // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/12/2015 1:57:00 AM

Paul, this is such a beautiful and romantic dance.l enjoyed the entire dance. Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 8/12/2015 10:34:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed this dance, Alexis! Thank you for stopping by with lovely comments and congrats. ~ All the best. // paul

Skat A

Date: 8/12/2015 1:55:00 AM

Congratulations Paul...SKAT

Paul Callus
Date: 8/12/2015 10:28:00 AM

Thank you, Skat. Have a lovely day:) // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2015 1:13:00 AM

Hello Paul, time just keeps passing, super enjoyed.. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Paul Callus
Date: 8/12/2015 10:30:00 AM

Thank you for enjoying and having me on your winners' list, Linda. ~ Time is our main enemy:) Hugs // paul

Neva Romaine

Date: 2/27/2015 12:56:00 PM

Hey Paul, stopped by for a visit. Wow! This is a deeply passionate and emotion grabbing poem. So beautifully written. Be Blessed, Neva

Paul Callus
Date: 2/27/2015 1:28:00 PM

Hi Neva...so pleased that you found it to your liking! Thank you for a lovely visit:) Take care. // paul

Julia Ward

Date: 2/17/2015 6:08:00 AM

Very nice. Count my hugs or stand-ins as I work through all your poems. Hugs, Alicia

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2015 9:46:00 AM

I admire your resilience, Alicia! You have a though job in front of you:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 2/17/2015 5:27:00 AM

i like the two thoughts i perceive in this poem.. :)! nice Paul.. :)!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2015 9:42:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi!:) Lovely to see you again in circulation. Hope the vacation was lovely and that the flu was not too hard on you. I'll go see if you posted anything new. hugs // paul