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Till Death Do Us Part

------>>---@@---<<------ twenty fingers speak of two rings' young bliss bridal stars twinkling love bulbs... nimble feet , warmth abides on to fifty years, old souls still feed eyes they pray that night sleep be sound... peace embraced, never part ----------------- (( for Dr. Ram's " Wedding" ))

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2011 9:47:00 PM

Congratulations, Nette. Glad to see you here AGAIN tonight!! In that winner circle.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2011 7:40:00 AM

Delighted to see you in the winners' circle, Nette. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 6:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nette in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/3/2011 7:29:00 PM

This is such a sweet piece, Nette :) oh wow, loved your approach for this-- reminds me of this golden couple I see at Church --they still look so much in love with each other, they even wear the same shirt sometimes (I know that's kinda cheesy, but on them it looked adorable!), gosh what one would give for a love like that! Congrats on your win :) - hugs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 6:25:00 PM

Congrats Nette dear friend on your fantastic win in the wedding contest with these words of value and luv.. enjoy another chart topping sweet success with luv..always..

John Freeman

Date: 4/3/2011 4:35:00 PM

A good looking verse up there in the top five Nette. Congratulations on your worthy poem's ffifth place honor. Quite true, a touching verse lady. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2011 3:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in my contest, nette

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/3/2011 6:26:00 AM

I loved your expressive write, Nette! Thank you for your kind comments always. I still have problems with right arm and hand and cannot write as much as I would! Have a great week!Kind regards, Gert

James Fraser

Date: 4/2/2011 9:14:00 AM

A precious piece of poetry Nette. Good luck in Dr. Rams contest....:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2011 10:59:00 PM

wow,nette, your unique expression blew me away, an awesome entry!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/1/2011 7:36:00 PM

enjoyed reading your work today!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2011 4:38:00 PM

Very lovely Nette. Best wishes for another success in Dr. Ram's Contest. Peace and love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 2:07:00 PM

Dynamic write Nette my friend.. powerful intro lines of the twenty fingers and two rings.. and oh that young bliss... good luck in Dr. Ram's contest luv.. he will be judging over weekend according to his current blog.. luv.. amazing as always my friend...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2011 1:47:00 PM

Good one that expresses steady and abiding love..Reads like winning material..Good luck..The way it posted twice was that when I validated it, it went to a diagnositic error page and I went back and tried to post so that I would not lose it but it had posted ...I did not go back in there and check it and I should have..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/1/2011 1:43:00 PM

So enjoyed Nette.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 1:42:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 1:40:00 PM

Your poetry always makes me smile, Nette. Not only was the wedding beautifully described, but the thought of a couple staying together for fifty years is a good reminder that sometimes love lasts a lifetime. Awesome entry for Dr. Ram's contest. Wishing you success! And thanks for your comment on my poem about Daniel. Love, Carolyn