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Tiger's Hunt

The tiger traces, through it's jungle home, His prey he chases, just then, the crackle of bone. Sleekly stalking, through shadow of tree, His prey just skulking, oblivious, carefree. Nostrils twitching, green eyes shining, Pupils dilating and paw's barbs refining. Lips pulled back, canines showing, It's the Tiger's tact, saliva flowing. Such a wonderful creature, watched in awe, Marvelous features, a strong, crushing jaw. Watching his hunting in divinest anguish and rapturous pain, In this death we should not languish, the creature that was slain. I suppose that's just nature, the way of the world, Just stay form the Tiger's abature, lest his claws would be unfurled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/19/2010 12:19:00 PM
A chara Ian, This is excellent. I like the rhyming couplets and the story line. Great job Joseph Le dea-ghui,
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Date: 5/17/2010 9:12:00 AM
LOL Y ISNT ANYBODY IN THE CHATS ANYMORE IM SO BORED RIGHT NOW
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Date: 5/17/2010 8:48:00 AM
thank you for all your help tough would do you should check out my other poem its about my grandma or if i die then it well be towards my mom
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Date: 5/17/2010 8:40:00 AM
sorry to bother you but do you know anything that rhymes with enough besides rough btw i really love this poem i can imagine it all in my mind great descriptions to
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:36:00 AM
There are tigers of all sorts in our lives aren't there...Keep the thought provoking writes flowing freely...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write..Welcome to soup..May your stay be long and productive with many writes and enjoyable reading of others...Sara
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