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Tiering Depression

Sinking Slowly Falling Someone Found Out Dying Deep Trouble Doing Things Evil Loser Life Over Lying Of Myself Writing Wanting Life Wishing Love Began Sleeping Sinful Living So Little Time Decaying Destroying Me Deserving My Pain Looking Losing Vision Lacking Very Lifeforce Wanting Worrying Much Wiping Many Tears Faking Feeling Lonesome Freeing Lucifer Satan Typing Tearing Apart Taking Apples Creedily Ornating Overly Stimulated Opening Sorrowful Heart Bilging Begetting Loneliness Being Lost Inside Forgotten Flailed Upon Fumbling Under Pressure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/26/2008 6:44:00 PM
I thought for a second that you might have an anagram going here and looked desperately for some kind of rhythm. By doing that I lost the emotion. I'll be praying for you.
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Date: 7/24/2008 4:31:00 PM
This poem captured my attention. Reading it, it sounds so desperate. Almost like you can't catch your breath! Such emotion isn't easy to live, or easy to write. Good job. I hope your world has more peace, than that lost place described in this poem. Blessings...Carrie
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