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Tides of War - One Nine and Sixteen Contest

The sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust Under the circling motes, bright in the sunlight. This house ravaged by war left to its self, The family, unhappily, were all killed in the last raid. This happy home where love abounded Mother and children faced the trying time alone. Man of the house had been away fighting, A photograph still swung drunkenly on the wall. The war years seemed like only yesterday The town has so many pieces to pick up. Many houses, empty just like this one Needed to house the growing homeless. These are for people lost all in the war, So carrying a lit candle each room was inspected. Boxes were ticked on the form carried...job complete, The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark. Penned 13/4/2018 Contest...one, nine and sixteen...Viv Wigley

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Date: 5/2/2018 9:10:00 PM
A great take on this challenge, Siren. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:27:00 PM
I am surprised how everyone came up with so many scenarios. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:04:00 PM
Such sad imagery Seren and unfortunately this scene must have been witnessed many times during times of conflict:-( Many congratulations on your win in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:09:00 AM
Back with congrats on your fine win, Seren.
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Date: 4/14/2018 6:29:00 PM
seren, how deep is this poem!... i have not seen the contest page though your poem was much enjoyed!..huggs
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Date: 4/13/2018 10:35:00 PM
Lovely poem. Well depicted, Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/14/2018 12:16:00 AM
thank you Line...Seren

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