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Tide

One by one, your dreams are torn until you're left hollow inside. There can't be happiness for you because it's slowly melting away. Castle walls are made of sand, memories and dreams ebb in the sea. You start to feel the exhaustion and soon you'll waste away inside; nothing can stop the relentless waters.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/24/2012 5:59:00 PM
Powerful words. You describe so well exactly how I feel some days. Hollow.
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