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Tidal Waves

Tidal Waves Brackish debris filled surf retreats depositing into hard sand graves pictures stolen from post cards Shards of a city strewn disjointedly still ticking clocks idled in the moment streets awash in decorative disarray liquid mud roiling through the streets ravenous pain stalking its victims cold shock of sunshine’s failure hands clutching grabbing carried on the crust of fear waving in silent farewell luxury and comfort crushed wild furor of seismic waves expending tectonic energy John G. Lawless 5/12/2015 submitted to - Show but Don’t Tell – Poetry Contest sponsor – Thomas Martin

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Date: 5/26/2015 1:02:00 PM
Hi John, congratulations on your fine win for your amazing poem that painted this horrific tidal wave devastation so well. Sandra
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:20:00 PM
John, Conrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
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Date: 5/22/2015 6:04:00 PM
wow, It reminded me of when I saw that movie about the tsunami. VERY good writing and well deserved win.
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Date: 5/22/2015 8:04:00 AM
Congs, I loved such in-detail poem, I must admit i liked it brother Bryan
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John Lawless
Date: 5/22/2015 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Bryan, always nice to hear a new voice on the soup.
Date: 5/21/2015 7:06:00 PM
sweet win. SK
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John Lawless
Date: 5/22/2015 9:49:00 AM
Thanks again SKAT
Date: 5/21/2015 1:41:00 PM
excellent descriptive write congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2015 9:50:00 AM
lol - I just enjoy reading the work of others it is the way I learn so much:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 5/22/2015 9:49:00 AM
Again I thank you. If these were medieval times you would be my poetic benefactor offering constant support and encouragement.
Date: 5/13/2015 3:03:00 AM
You had me entranced with your descriptions here! Well done John! Hugs, Deb
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John Lawless
Date: 5/22/2015 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Deb for your comment and support.
Date: 5/13/2015 1:47:00 AM
John, this is a fantastic write! Great descriptive language! Love, Kim
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John Lawless
Date: 5/22/2015 9:46:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I just kept flashing on so many disasters, so many victims.

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