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Tick Tock

Tick Tock, Tick Tock One second, two seconds And it won't stop Every minute counts, ever seconds that is passing by I see the time being wasted over nothing, why Why Can't I stop the time Just to rest and to take in my surroundings To gain confidence and set up a sense of safeness in my mind As if the future is gonna settle itself down As if there is something such as a saved future Tick Tock, Tick Tock I'm still talking, time's still passing, I'm still crying, time's still laughing Shoving in my face those seconds I'll never get back What I could be doing right now instead of writing this down Building my future up, letting my walls down And it's ticking and it's tocking sweat is trickling down I could knock down pull down tear down every single clock in this town to the ground But time won't stop Tick Tock, Tick Tock

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Date: 12/26/2013 8:02:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Darcy ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/25/2013 9:11:00 PM
Hope you are enjoying the holidays, DARCY, HA love this. It is very catchy and deep.... Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Darcy Hazel Morgan
Date: 12/26/2013 2:33:00 AM
Thank you so much. I'm so glad to be here, this is a lovely community with so many sweet welcoming persons like yourself :). By the way, I love your poems. I've read 5 of them so far and I have to say, so far so good! Happy holidays!
Date: 12/24/2013 2:43:00 PM
Darcy, I like your first poetic piece on the site. A great flowing poem. Hard to make time stop.. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend. Merry Christmas @-> LINDA <-@
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Darcy Hazel Morgan
Date: 12/24/2013 3:30:00 PM
thank you so much Linda, it really means a lot, knowing it's the first poem I've ever written. I'll make sure to check out your contest and I'm really looking forward to get to know this community better. Have yourself a very merry Christmas :D

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