Tick Tock

All that was heard tick tock, tick tock, tick tock, life begins and ends by the clock.

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/13/2009 7:20:00 AM

Oh yes Ann,..this is well writen! ty....james

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/8/2008 9:31:00 AM

Very true....everything we do seems to be run by the clock. I quit wearing my watch because I like the illusion that perhaps time doesn't control me completely after all...but it's only illusion. I still have to follow a schedule like everyone else. *sigh* Very nice poem! ~Juliane

Date: 11/29/2008 4:22:00 PM

Interesting perspective. So true. Much said in just a few words. Keep on writing! Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/29/2008 3:16:00 PM

Wonderful Ann, and so right on....BG

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/29/2008 1:08:00 PM

You are a brilliant woman my friend. Thanks for the read.