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So you want a couplet - two lines that rhyme Sorry, Silent One - that takes too much time November 22nd, 2015 Epigram Couplet Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Michael Tor

Date: 11/26/2015 5:30:00 AM

LOL great win Lin!

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/25/2015 11:49:00 PM

Ha! Ha! This is good, Lin! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Lin Lane
Date: 11/26/2015 2:18:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. It's what popped into my mind so I went with it.

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 6:04:00 PM

Lin, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 6:26:00 PM

Thanks. skat.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/24/2015 4:53:00 PM

Very amusing Lin! Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 4:56:00 PM

Thanks, Connie.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/24/2015 4:16:00 PM

Congratulations Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Nayda.

Lu Loo

Date: 11/24/2015 12:39:00 PM

AHA! love this! Congrats Lin! Well deserved win :) -lu *smiles*

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 12:43:00 PM

Thanks, Laura. It was fun to write.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/24/2015 11:55:00 AM

Unique and funny! You were quick on the draw:) Congrats on a lovely win. // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 12:11:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Sometimes I thought hits you on the side of the head, and this was one of those times.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/24/2015 10:10:00 AM

Lin, so funny! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 10:13:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Alexis. :)

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 11/24/2015 10:05:00 AM

He he....a brilliant one....superb presence of mind..congrats

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 10:13:00 AM

Thanks, Rizwana. It's either presence of mind or insanity. lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 9:22:00 AM

this one was one of my very favorites. BIG congrats on your win . I have too many comments to catch up on so I am just trying to see short poems before my trip. Happy thanksgiving to you!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 9:32:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Have a safe trip!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/24/2015 9:13:00 AM

Back again, Haha.... Love this! Congratulation on your win!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 9:17:00 AM

And you did equally well, Eve...Congratulations to you.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/23/2015 8:51:00 AM

When Silent One/ Asks you something to do/ You have to comply, my dear/ You not allowed to boo! Ha-ha! Good luck dear Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 8:54:00 AM

oh but, Demetrios... I DID comply. I wrote an epigram couplet, personalized just for him..;)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/23/2015 12:46:00 AM

: ) Big smiles...Love this.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 2:50:00 PM

Thanks, Charmaine, for the compliment and the smile.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/22/2015 7:37:00 PM

Very cute Lin....made me smile

Lin Lane
Date: 11/22/2015 9:06:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Tim.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/22/2015 6:02:00 PM

Dear Lin Lane Yes a great entry for the contest, short and very sweet dearest lady, enjoyed it very much, lol the pic took wonderful movie, cheri yes I sketch and draw, I don't paint although I've always wanted to learn, my grandmother was a painter though, for me I choose to write instead so I paint with words my brush is my pen, my canvas the open blank screen or page, so we have these crafts in common, yes, cheri

Lin Lane
Date: 11/22/2015 6:12:00 PM

It seems we do, cheri. There was a period of about 6 months when I couldn't write. I pulled out my paints. Then I started making jewelry. I enjoy all of them, but my favorite is writing. I always enjoy your visits.. Thanks, Cheri.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/22/2015 4:12:00 PM

LOL great!!!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/22/2015 5:35:00 PM

Thank you, Arthur.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2015 3:29:00 PM

hahaha. I LOVE this one.(wish I thought of it. I give you first place)

Lin Lane
Date: 11/22/2015 3:33:00 PM

LOL I laughed as I typed it, and was going to title it Epigram Slam, but I thought that might incense him! Oh pish posh if it had. Thanks for laughing with me. ;)