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Tic Toc

Tick Toc The clock turning Round , round without ceasing Blow your horn in celebration For time passes and the shadows lengthen So dance and sing in the moonlight Laugh, time is the jester Another day Tick Toc Barbara Gorelick 9/2/13 Just Nine Lines contest..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 10:11:00 AM

Nic once... ... always love LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2013 8:13:00 AM

congrats ~SKAT~

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/11/2013 8:53:00 PM

Fantastic write, Barbara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/11/2013 8:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2013 6:11:00 AM

love the jester part, barbara.. congrats on your fine slot..:) huggs

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/10/2013 10:59:00 PM

Many congrats Barbara for this win and write.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/10/2013 8:22:00 PM

wonderful write and win...congrats to you :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2013 4:42:00 PM

I'm glad I took time to read this tic toc, grat job. Congrats

Vandana Sharma

Date: 9/3/2013 8:19:00 AM

beautifully done!

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 9/2/2013 3:37:00 PM

† I Think We'll Just Take That Clock As Time And Toss It Out The Window. Smile, You Know ? Cool Poe Like The Layout. Love, John *

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/2/2013 2:34:00 PM

you've accomplished quite a lot in just 9 lines! well done!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/2/2013 1:15:00 PM

LOVELY! Beautiful, Barbara...I really loved the feel of this, and the message to live every moment...Bless you for this sweet poem. Good luck in contest! :)