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Thy Heart

Love me with thy heart which functions through love;Every heart beat is a split image of our existing; We never shared our love that would be selfish;We opened and gave our love like an opening shellfish; The pearl that gave;Kept coming like waves; To make one's love is to take both our hearts together;Give me your shredded one;And I'll return to you the one you gave me before; Love me with it for that we only need one heart;The one that holds us as one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/4/2010 3:05:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I like your poem. More please
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Danny. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2010 5:37:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup. A very sensuous write. You cheated yourself with the format.
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Date: 8/3/2010 11:15:00 PM
A romantic profession of your love, Danny. I like the way you think! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 8/3/2010 9:45:00 PM
Very loving poem. Whoever is the object of this love is a lucky person indeed. Hope you have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 8/3/2010 8:46:00 PM
Beautiful poetry you have written here enjoyed it and have a great night. Please read my new poem called: Mental S.
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