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Thunder's Threat

Thunder's threat You know us Yet you are still gossip on us You know we have no where expect Here to lay our comfort Cozy bed. Thunder, why must You extrude the rain Your lighten is enough to make Us fear, it makes our body din Some of us have grown With greyish hair Now he's about to fall, he is just Coming like dew, where do you want Us to lay ourselves at this night We will just be left strand in him, as he's Already injecting us with heavy breeze.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/29/2015 2:37:00 AM

G'day Afolabi... the scales of justice will never balance until the rich offer assistance to the vagrant poor who only wish for a roof over their head at night - thank you Afolabi - Lindsay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2015 2:26:00 PM

Descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one today.The fact that there are homeless people is very sad and one never knows what life can issue out so that we could be in the same fix..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/2/2015 5:11:00 PM

Thank you for your comment. Those people were in great suffering, my prayer to the Marvel is to have mercy on then, at times when I watched them on TV I feel sorry for them.....bless you.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/29/2015 7:28:00 AM

Hi Afolabi! Our life can never be completely serene; threats appear like dark clouds, and their effects are like those of lightning. Enjoyed this poem of yours. All the best. // paul

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/29/2015 8:57:00 AM

Thank you for your worm and pleasantly comment, as for those they are vagrant, they have no where to sleep expect to lay maybe piece of cloth on the ground behind a shop or somewhere else to sleep for the night, my prayer to God is to save them from evil and bless them so as to not live like that again. Thanks again