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Thunderhead

Thunderhead Billowing blackness towering over it’s prey yellow eyes flashing she deliberately licks cold raindrops from trembling lips 3/31/2015 Submitted to Rick Parise - Tanka contest

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Date: 4/4/2015 8:43:00 PM
Interesting personification. I like the last two lines - like goosebumps in the rain
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Date: 3/31/2015 11:58:00 PM
An incredible, ominous image created, John! Best wishes and hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/31/2015 10:39:00 PM
Lovely tanka Rick! Gl in contest!
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