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Thunder Love In Me

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Oh take me to that place I long to go where fantasy breaks out of gilded cage the wanton ways of pleasure I must know when pent up passion is allowed to rage Come enter in the garden of my need where succulence awaits in fruit so sweet Let fingers circle round and dip in greed awaiting time to taste of lover's treat With cherry flavored essence gloss your lips as fingers tug your hair in urgency hold tight to curves of undulating hips as I indulge my sensual revelry Now thunder love in me with manly might As passion takes us to that burst of light Eileen Manassian

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2015 3:13:00 AM

- Sensual and very hot - A wonderful poem, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/18/2015 12:11:00 AM

Dammit, Eileen, I've just had a shower, now I've gotta go and take another cold one! Voluptuous write, young Lady. Viv x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2015 11:39:00 AM

love the tittle, enjoyed this write... luv p.d.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 5:57:00 PM

Thanks, PD. Glad to have a visit from you. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/17/2015 9:41:00 AM

This is ooh la la hot! ;0)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 10:11:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/17/2015 9:22:00 AM

no one does sensual the way you do, eileen! this one is masterful...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 5:58:00 PM

:) Glad you liked it, Ilene. This is a place where I can write my little heart out...I'm glad I'm not the only one who writes sensual poetry, but it sure feels good to have that adjective to cheer me up...MASTERFUL. ;) You are a dear.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/16/2015 4:21:00 PM

I agree with Njeri - to me the queen of passion :-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 4:11:00 AM

Love the title, Jan....Manifold thanks, Hon. I need to write....My favorite topic. Hugs

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 6/16/2015 3:09:00 PM

Wow Eileen, this is very hot. You are the queen of sensual words:-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/17/2015 5:58:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. I appreciate the title. HUGS! :)