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Thunder In the Dawn

the thunder in your voice precocious in the dawn mighty tower of white crashing down a frothy song as sand shook beneath my shore planted feet the rushing wave covered the beach like a sheet Rithimus Divisa 4 Poetry Contest Gregory Barden sponsor From Summer Storm written 6-2-2020 first entered: Brian's Select 3 contest 7-3-2020 Brian Strand Sponsor

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Date: 8/30/2020 3:36:00 AM
A thunderous cacophony of sound! Certainly, as Andrea remarks, very spectacular...creates a notable impression. Very well penned, Jeanne. All the very best. :) john
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/30/2020 9:14:00 PM
I love storms...even though this last one has wiped out my small Mexican village pretty heavily. Clean up is underway but will take awhile...
Date: 8/9/2020 4:33:00 AM
a very powerful write indeed
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/9/2020 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Jack. and nice to see you. Jeanne
Date: 8/8/2020 2:01:00 PM
wow, I really love the four lines you used. The imagery is spectacular.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/9/2020 12:12:00 PM
Good Morning Andrea...thank you for the lovely comment...hope you are having a fantastic weekend. :D
Date: 8/6/2020 11:52:00 AM
Perfect imagery Jeanne, a verse in its own right. Wish you luck in the contest. Tom
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/6/2020 1:32:00 PM
You're the sweetest, Tom!

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