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Thunder Challenging the Gods

Thunder Challenging the Gods Soft warmth coerced an easiness spent waves lapping my thankful feet crabs skittering sideways, castanets posed, dance to the ebb and flow of water’s endless journey. Gulls circle tides shifting winds shrieking at the change of fate, hardened edge and hot steel blend sparks igniting demon trait. Valiant the battle waged beneath the darkened sky humid heat – dry cold light slashing the horizon. Thunder challenging the gods. 8/11/2016 submitted to – It Takes Four – Poetry Contest sponsor – Broken Wings syllable count verified by howmanysyllables.com Crystalline Kimo Quatrain Tanka

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Date: 8/24/2016 7:47:00 PM
John, this is fantastic! You painted a vivid scene with your words. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Kim, always nice to hear from you.
Date: 8/23/2016 10:56:00 AM
John, love the scene congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 8/22/2016 1:22:00 PM
John, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:41:00 PM
T...H...A...N...K....S.....BW This was a tricky little pony to ride, shifting styles, shifting rhythms. Thanks for the wonderful theme of 4. The muse will be out of therapy in a few weeks.
Date: 8/21/2016 7:48:00 PM
That was a meditative painting of nature at the shore. Congrats! :-)
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Tom. The muse needed a day at the beach so I gave her the day off..
Date: 8/13/2016 4:24:00 PM
Beautiful, John ... CayCay
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John Lawless
Date: 8/25/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thanks CayCay, sorry for the tardiness in replying.
Date: 8/13/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thanks TJ, it is an challenging combination of forms.
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Date: 8/12/2016 11:21:00 AM
Well written great poem x
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John Lawless
Date: 8/12/2016 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Wendy, a somewhat difficult task to meld four disparate poetic forms into a cohesive unit. Not sure how well I managed.

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