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Thunder

Thunder rolled slowly across the sky Like some great beast about to die.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/16/2016 8:59:00 AM

Wow! I can visualize the fall! Congrats, Jerome!

Jerome Malenfant
Date: 11/16/2016 11:33:00 AM

Thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/15/2016 5:38:00 PM

Fabulous imagery Jerome congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Jerome Malenfant
Date: 11/15/2016 6:36:00 PM

Thanks.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/15/2016 9:06:00 AM

Very powerful imagery, Jerome. Congrats on your fine placement! Sandra

Jerome Malenfant
Date: 11/15/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/15/2016 7:43:00 AM

An ominous effect runs through these two lines, Jerome. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Jerome Malenfant
Date: 11/15/2016 1:28:00 PM

Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2016 8:41:00 PM

wow, I like this image! It truly does sound like a beast!! Congrats.

Jerome Malenfant
Date: 11/15/2016 1:26:00 PM

Thanks. These lines are the beginnings of (hopefully) a longer poem I've been struggling with, trying for a "T.S. Elliot" feel. I've got about the first 4 stanzas but haven't yet figured out where to go with it after that.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/14/2016 8:25:00 PM

Oh, yes.....this is a great Crystalline!! Well done, Jerome !!

Jerome Malenfant
Date: 11/15/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thanks.

White Wolf

Date: 11/12/2016 12:17:00 AM

Very poignant Jerome! Great write.

Jerome Malenfant
Date: 11/13/2016 11:08:00 PM

Thanks.

John Lawless

Date: 11/11/2016 9:16:00 PM

i like the frightening image this one conjures up Chris.

Jerome Malenfant
Date: 11/14/2016 11:54:00 AM

Thanks.