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Through Your Eyes

Her eyes were him wanting as she sat waiting dark secrets she hid teasing glances bid him come to her side there to always abide written06/12/2015 by Shadow Hamilton contest: Through your Eyes visual 3 words used 25

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 7:20:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win .Hugs Eve

David Mohn

Date: 6/22/2015 9:37:00 PM

Nicely written Shadow...big congrats

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2015 4:34:00 PM

Shadow:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2015 4:40:00 PM

tnx Skat hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2015 3:43:00 PM

Shadow, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2015 4:39:00 PM

ty Linda for your continued support hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 3:26:00 PM

Big congratulations in this contest, Shadow. I loved the poems in this contest.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2015 4:38:00 PM

me too Andrea ty hugs

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/22/2015 1:45:00 PM

Hi Shadow: congratulations on your win!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2015 4:35:00 PM

ty Ralph hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2015 11:11:00 AM

Those teasing glances usually get what they want! Congrats on your fine win! // paul

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2015 4:35:00 PM

ty Paul they do indeed lol hugs

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/21/2015 8:56:00 PM

many congrats on your win in the contest

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2015 5:31:00 AM

ty Francine congrats to you as well hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 6/21/2015 3:24:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Shadow:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2015 5:30:00 AM

ty Jan hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2015 3:28:00 PM

I like how you did your poem for that specific visual, if it is the one I am thinking of Very well done, Shadow!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/15/2015 3:31:00 PM

ty Andrea hugs

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/13/2015 7:42:00 AM

I almost chose that visual but went back to check again and number visual 4 struck me very deep so chose it instead. Great interpretation my friend. I found this contest theme a great one. A7

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2015 4:22:00 PM

I agree great theme ty Robert hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2015 5:41:00 PM

lovely interpretation of the visual - good luck in the contest Shadow:-) hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2015 4:21:00 PM

ty Jan hugs