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Through Their Eyes

Through the bottom of a glass I see the world looking so Rosie just one for the road I say just one more whiskey her baby gives her a smile how lucky is she to be alive one more cuddle she says then off to see her little sister Where's the car lock I cant see the radio's singing to me I hit the road full speed ahead I didn't see her, and now she's dead ! comp entry 10/08/2016

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Date: 8/11/2016 4:10:00 PM
a great poem highlighting a subject that needs addressing. Powerful pen congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 8/11/2016 3:41:00 PM
I really like the theme and message you chose here Stephen,congratulations!
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/11/2016 3:50:00 PM
thank you , wrecks lives seemed to hit the contest well stephen
Date: 8/10/2016 6:34:00 AM
Powerful write and well said.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/10/2016 7:11:00 AM
cheers hopefully comp entry that carry s a message stephen

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