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Through Their Eyes

I hung around the bars in town An’ sometimes in the jail No one cared about my problems – Nobody paid my bail. One mornin’ I woke up sober I shaved an’ combed my hair Pressed my pants an’ shined my boots An’ breathed the mornin’ air. No one knew what got into me I'm always up an’ down But I knew what had woke me up The rodeo’s in town I'd rodeo’d for fifteen years Goin’ from town to town I was a champion ‘til my wife Ran off with Chuck the Clown. Well I caught up with Chuck the Clown Down by the Rio Grande I shot him until I got tired – Buried him in the sand. The judge who tried me for the deed Traveled from town to town He loved to watch the rodeo But hated every clown So he gave me just thirty days The crowd could only frown The judge said justice had been served The day I shot the clown July 29, 2016 For Contest Through Their Eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/16/2016 5:38:00 PM
Congrats Larry, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/16/2016 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy!!..Larry
Date: 8/11/2016 3:34:00 PM
This is awesome Barry,I love that the sentence was just 30 days!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/11/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Sara...thirty days for a philandering clown seems about right!
Date: 8/6/2016 11:41:00 AM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/7/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thanks for your most kind words..Larry
Date: 7/30/2016 2:16:00 PM
loved this gripping write
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/1/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Jack

Book: Shattered Sighs