Through the Window

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Song in the making

THROUGH THE WINDOW When we are touching through the window where I see you it's just emotion, but such emotion! you look into tomorrow where you think you're going and maybe wonder about what I am not showing. when I can feel you through the window and I know you it's just emotion, but such emotion! sometimes you see me through the window, and my crying and if I said I didn't love you, I would be lying. and when you reach me through the window, I know you know me it's just emotion, but such emotion! and I would give my life to have the right to show you and I would give my life if time was right to know you. but windows keep you far away although I see you it's just emotion, but such emotion! and so I say some prayers for you and your pursueing and through the window this is what I will be doing. © ron wilson arbuthnot aka Vee Bdosa the Doylestown Poet

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Vee Bdosa

Date: 9/11/2015 4:52:00 PM

Ha ha, this is one of only 2 songs I have borrowed the melody from and set new words to the music, it is The music is a 1927 tango-canción (tango with lyrics) called "Adios, Muchachos", composed by Argentinian Julio Cesar Sanders (often credited in the U.S. as "Lenny Sanders" and so it may be in the Public Domain. I think it is. Anyway, the song was later recorded as I GET IDEAS and so if you know the song, you can sing this poem right along with it.

Janet Lorenzo

Date: 9/11/2015 2:53:00 PM

I like this very much - very well expressed. nice job

Vee Bdosa
Date: 9/11/2015 4:37:00 PM

ThanQ Janet, this is a special one to me, making it a song, I had a melody, but it was written to the melody of another 1920's song and so I may have to change it. Not sure of the copyright on the old song yet.