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Through the Valley of Doubt

The eyes of lovers quietly converge In a silent realm where time disappears Assistance from the primordial urge. Will nourish desire as it appears To be a guide to boundaries drawn out And linger for an echo that will come As it travels through the valley of doubt From the rhythm of the heart's pounding drum Its then truth is acknowledged with its will To release all fear that can suffocate That yearns to be loved on the farthest hill Where the eyes that merge are left to their fate Whether by romance or a hungry glance This bonding of needs that the eyes enhance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/9/2017 10:37:00 PM
Gorgeous Sonnet, Frederic, and so well-constructed, with intelligence and creativity ... congratulations on your win, my friend! Blessings, brother! :-)
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Date: 7/17/2016 5:59:00 PM
Frederic, Great Penned sonnet win.... SKAT
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:32:00 AM
A great work all throughout Fred! Congratulations! :) _Hans
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations with this on your placement in 6th! Lovely work!
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Date: 5/30/2016 5:56:00 PM
Frederic, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/30/2016 4:51:00 PM
Good Sonnet .....Congratulations on your win
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Date: 5/30/2016 4:14:00 PM
Great Sonnet, Frederick. You write them so well. Congratulations on your win for this well-written, romantic write. Sandra
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/30/2016 6:02:00 PM
not as well as you dear poet.

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