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Through the Steamed Up Glass

Arriving home from work Sleepy and tired Hot shower i craved A quiet evening desired To the bathroom i go Cascades of water sounds Through the steamed up glass A curvaceous figure is found Her shoulder length hair Soaked back in hold Her body pressed to the pane A sight to behold As i watch her shower Admiring her lathered hands Caressing as she cleans In solitary command Her undulations Wetted glow In adventurous display Her body shows I catch her eye Through the steamed up glass My girlfriend, my love My Highland lass Door ajar She invites me in Naked like birth Skin to skin Our hands in wander As the water flows We merge into one In loving glow http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-7.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/29/2010 10:04:00 AM
Passionate and with Class...Such a relaxing evening indeed..Charma
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Date: 1/28/2010 10:38:00 PM
I really liked this James. It took me by surprise after reading so much of your material. Your love and passion for this woman so shine through in this poem. How lovely. And how lucky a woman she is. I have been busy lately and not many visits. Glad I was able to catch this one. I will send you soup mail to answer you ? on my page. Thanks for your time and warm comments that were so deeply appreciated. Have a great day!
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Date: 1/28/2010 7:54:00 PM
Don't tell me you are going to start writing erotica (lol) must be a trend..oh dear... .. I like your other poetry much better... dear sir.. but this is sort of romantic.. and it is not too sexually explicit. acceptable ...please don't go all wierd on me... smiling here in Canada.. makes my poems look little kid stuff... gosh darn
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Date: 1/28/2010 7:27:00 PM
Sooo romantic, James! And as Deborah says, very tastefully presented in your own unique Highlander style. Now let me offer you a terrycloth kilt to help you dry off. Smile. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2010 5:43:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, James! Delightful and romantic. Love between two people in love and happy!! God bless you guys! And thank you for reading and leaving comments on my poems! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/28/2010 5:02:00 PM
OH MY GOSH! I love this piece! So purely romantic and aaaahhhh so beautiful! But it also makes me realize just how much alone I really am! I cried reading this, because you are so lucky to have that beautiful passion, something I have missed for more than 4 years! Thank you so much for sharing this! It is very beautiful! You are an extraordinary talented man!
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Date: 1/28/2010 2:13:00 PM
Nice ending to a tiring day. Very refreshing also. Very passionate write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/28/2010 2:13:00 PM
Very nice..tastefull ;) I don't think you need the last 2 verses..it's more powerfull without. Light & Love
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