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Through the Mist

Through the Mist
It feels like a lifetime has passed since my beloved I last saw, Bedecked in shining armor, my brave Geoffrey did gallantly gallop, Riding his silver steed, through a soft silky blue morning mist That like a tender lover enveloped and amorously embraced him.
Now overtaken by dark despair, silently willing my love to reappear, Despondently I peer through this most mystifying mist, realizing that On this fateful day twenty years before, he had unwittingly succumbed To its seductive allure because man and mist had merged becoming one.
08-21-2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/21/2014 4:02:00 AM
I understand This... beautifully poetic.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/21/2014 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Vicki. It is really good to hear from you and you are so kind to compliment my work! I greatly appreciate your support and encouragement. Pandita
Date: 10/14/2014 9:40:00 AM
powerful pen pandita very beautiful drawn piece
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 8:53:00 PM
you also have a beautiful day oh i am steady transporting myself smiling
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/14/2014 8:44:00 PM
Liam, thank you so much for your compliments. This one is special for me because I enjoyed transporting myself to another time and place. Have a great day! Pandita
Date: 8/31/2014 1:50:00 AM
Excellence Pandita.... Mystically penned... Super-awesome as well. Verlena
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/31/2014 3:27:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Verlena. I can't tell you how much your compliments mean to me! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 8:01:00 PM
Pandita, I love this mystifying story! Wonderfully penned! Kika
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 8:56:00 PM
Thank you dear Kika for your kind compliments which I appreciate! Pandita
Date: 8/24/2014 9:48:00 AM
A lovely romantic write! Thanks for your visit to my page..
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/24/2014 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ken for your wonderful compliments which I truly appreciate! Pandita
Date: 8/24/2014 12:35:00 AM
I like the way you used imagery to project your feelings and yes, it does succeed. The title of the poem is succinct too. Congratulations!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/24/2014 8:24:00 AM
Hi Venkat, thank you so very much for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate your great comments and compliments! Warm regards. Pandita
Date: 8/24/2014 12:32:00 AM
excellent. thank you this was a muched enjoyed read.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/24/2014 12:35:00 AM
Hi Maurice, I am very happy that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you very much for visiting! Warm regards. Pandita
Date: 8/22/2014 1:44:00 AM
wow, such a mystical one! ghostly!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/22/2014 6:41:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Well, I guess the "mist" pulled me in too - lol!

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