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Through the Grass

Beyond the tall kelp The movement of ocean waves Patterns of brocade

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 4:59:00 PM
Creative imagery conveys your thoughts in a unique way. Much said in just thee lines--a picture with words. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/26/2009 6:18:00 PM
A very lovely image! I can see it so clearly through your words.
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Date: 4/26/2009 3:36:00 PM
cool!
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