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Through the Fog

The fog makes it hard to see on the path Candlelight is all that breaches the dark She holds a pumpkin that gives glowing bath The eeriness shows death its every mark Stumbling, seeing darkness and its dire wrath Following the path, surely to embark Death follows close behind as she wanders The only voice she hears is her masters
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/19/2012 7:31:00 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Russell. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/16/2012 12:35:00 PM
DDEP DARK AND DENSELY EERIE WITH FABULOUS RHYME AND FORM RUSSELL LUV MAKING THIS AMAZING WRITE SO SPOOKY ,, FANTASTIC AS ALWAYS MY FRIEND.
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