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Through the Condensation

Arms raised, her charms rise jet black mane cascades wetted hour glass figure viewed her curvaceous tanned skin fuels she turns, that look, I'm in love .

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/26/2015 3:21:00 PM

Quite passionate and well done.

James Fraser
Date: 1/27/2015 2:10:00 PM

Thank you MLK, hopefully soon I'll meet the condensation, James :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/25/2015 4:34:00 AM

Fantastic verse here! It was a pleasure to read, and very fine imagery!Always, Laura

James Fraser
Date: 1/27/2015 1:28:00 PM

Thank you kindly Laura, glad you liked this short piece, James :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2015 3:33:00 PM

A winning smile no less..Great descriptive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 4:01:00 PM

A winning smile going back to my mind, just like other thoughts, soon left behind. Have a blessed evening Sara, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2015 2:13:00 PM

yes, this can make a man's heart turn to love!! (even a few women. heehee)

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 2:26:00 PM

Ha-ha, yes indeed, duh!! never thought about the role reversal. Have a blessed day Andrea, James :) x

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/20/2015 6:28:00 PM

A romantic gem this poem is, radiating the warmth of love! Beautiful James!#7

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 1:27:00 PM

Thanks kindly Connie, your comments always make me smile, James :)x

James Peranteau

Date: 1/20/2015 5:06:00 PM

Hello my poetic friend and brother from another mother ! Missed ya dude ! Love the Tanka here ! Every word....not just every stanza....every word in this write leads the reader right(write) to your thought ! Awesome ! A pleasure reading you again....much love, james

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 1:15:00 PM

Hi James, long time no words. How's Noah, and I trust your both well? It's always a pleasure seeing you here, missed you also. I intend to stick around, so lets bump into each other - have a blessed day James :) :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2015 1:37:00 PM

I can certainly, see that you are in love; an excellent depiction.

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 1:06:00 PM

Thank you kindly MLK, have a blessed day, James :) :)

David Meade

Date: 1/19/2015 4:57:00 PM

Through the steam love rises!!!! 7

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 12:44:00 PM

My imagination is steaming up my mind David, thanks kindly for appreciating my poem, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/19/2015 4:43:00 PM

oozzzzzzzzzzzzzing and steamy picture .. ---olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 12:41:00 PM

Ha-ha! indeed a steamy picture. I need to put such writes to the side and concentrate on some other topics. Spring is soon, then Summer, time to allow the seasons to speak. Thanks kindly for your visit Olive, always appreciated, James :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/19/2015 4:42:00 PM

So very nice! :) :)

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 12:36:00 PM

Thank you Casarah, much appreciated, James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2015 4:11:00 PM

wow what awesome sensual imagery - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 1/20/2015 2:24:00 PM

I really need to have a conversation with my mind Jan, it's just not hot enough ;-) seriously, thank you so much for all your support - James :) hugs :) xx