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Through the Blurs

The scorching sun Blazed on my neck Causing me to wreck The dust going up In the air Has let me notice an old snare I don't know what happened Will I ever? Just these few moments Has turned me around Grazing in the distance Is an old friend That I never really knew that Well But then sadly she fell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/14/2015 10:58:00 AM
You have depicted humanity within it's ultimate vulnerability. Through our own fog's, we are left to carry a weight of life's experience's. Peace. :)
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