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Through Dark Rainfalls

======================== Through dark rainfalls, how can I sleep? A nightmare crawls through dark rainfalls! It pries the walls and tries to seep through. Dark rain falls... How can I sleep? ========================

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Gabriel Sundman

Date: 9/5/2015 4:14:00 AM

Dark and spooky.

Lycia Harding
Date: 9/5/2015 3:16:00 PM

Hi Gabriel! True, but without the dark, there is no light...

Kamran Rashid

Date: 9/3/2015 5:45:00 PM

ahhhhh..gosh it is really fearing me here and reminding of all dark i have faced but it on the other gives a way out for those who belive in light perfctly you have graced the words and the title##congrats

Lycia Harding
Date: 9/5/2015 3:15:00 PM

Thank you, Kamran. What a cool comment! We must always remember - without the dark, there is no light...

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/28/2015 12:32:00 AM

Wet and dark triolet ... Good write! Best luck in the contest, dear!

Lycia Harding
Date: 8/28/2015 9:15:00 AM

Kim! Hi. Thank you, my little Poe. Good luck to you, as well (if you enter) I'm sure you will come up with something dark and perfect, as usual. Xoxo

Jadazzle United

Date: 8/22/2015 4:39:00 PM

This is deep and dark Lycia - good luck :-) hugs Jan xx (yes its me - I am back with my writing partner after a year's break woohoo dreams do come true:-)

Lycia Harding
Date: 8/22/2015 6:16:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. And good job on re-uniting with your writing partner. A year goes by fast but if you're waiting on something, it can feel like ten! xoxo LyLy