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Threshold To Memories

So sweet the sight of home’s threshold Threshold into those childhood days; Days up the tree we climbed and played Played and sang, laughed silly, squabbled. FOUR LINES ONLY CONTEST - Visual 4 Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Kim Patrice Nunez 08 June 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2015 3:50:00 PM

those sure were the good old days. Nothing like the childhood memories, sweet kim!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/8/2015 7:02:00 PM

Sweet memories expressed in just a few lines, great job! Hugs

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/8/2015 2:58:00 PM

What a beautiful image of a happy home you created in this wonderful poem, Kim! Great job, and good luck in the contest :) ps. I'm glad to see a poem not based on Visual #3- (I even did #3)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/8/2015 12:38:00 PM

Kim this piece made me smile tonight. Lovely memories indeed, wishing you the best for the contest ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2015 9:54:00 AM

This makes me smile. In my poem the fellow had lost his lover and he was sitting in her favorite chair reminiscing. Although the sun was shining there was a sad cloud wrapped around him.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 6/8/2015 9:29:00 AM

Wow Kim! Such great memories that you have, and it penned beautifully as a poem. I remembered that I ever used the same format as you did in my poem "Chain of Guilty Room", glad to read your fun and exciting childhood piece today, hug, yanny

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2015 7:23:00 AM

lovely memories of childhood Kim - i went with the a similar theme in my poem but the playground image - getting spooky we are thinking alike! Good luck in the contest nette has a tough job with this contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7

Jan Allison
Date: 6/8/2015 7:32:00 AM