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Threshold of Life

just one step taking you away from then into now, hurt and anger left behind step into the threshold of a new life pleasure abounds so be brave just one step Penned 18/08/2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2017 8:29:00 PM

An awesome write with an awesome message Seren. Well done and congrats on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 12:35:00 PM

Seren, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/20/2017 7:42:00 PM

Very beautiful and well written Seren!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/19/2017 5:29:00 PM

Okay but don't trip me. Great poem

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2017 4:17:00 AM

one step is all it takes Seren but it isn't always simple to leave - makes me think of someone in an abusive relationship made to feel so worthless they can't break free:-( hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/19/2017 4:05:00 AM

Wow, this is a very symmetrical Tetractys, so very awesome! You have written a fantastic write here Seren! It's nice to see a post of yours again my friend! I surely enjoyed reading your enlightening poem here this morning! What a delightful and inspirational piece this poem really is! Great Work!!