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Threshold-S- Hail Thee

Threshold(s) Hail thee The path that delivers I will elevate; For the life that lives deserves whole eternal, In the place of rest that saints will dominate. The many battles fought to safeguard a trait, To let a brood with no lore of nominal. The path that delivers I must elevate. Not she rests assured by nature’s salvage date. This life yet renders bosoms for cardinal: To nourish…, enrich this trait to dominate. From ‘yes’ I breathe to still ‘no’ I defecate. These, I owe house of notional tribunal. For that life’s deliverance I will elevate. Progenies I, owe this life that promulgate News of me to flora and fauna’s astral. I owe this life for those gifts to dominate. Nerve not she got, to stand tests to procreate Won’t my lines have been thrown in lone nocturnal? This path that delivers I will elevate, To the place of rest that saints will dominate. ©A.O, 4/4/2014. Dedicated to my mother and my father. And parents alike.

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Date: 4/17/2014 2:06:00 AM
Congrats on ur win Abdul !
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:08:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2014 12:02:00 PM
A great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/16/2014 9:42:00 AM
Happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats,
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Date: 4/16/2014 4:31:00 AM
sweet dedication to your parents :) wow!!! _ CONGRATULATIONS ON THE BIG WIN.. :D
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:12:00 AM
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:11:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS MY FRIEND... I HOPE YOU HAD A BEAUTIFUL BIRTHDAY.... MISS HEARING FROM YOU... BUT OH WELL!! XOX....LINDA
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