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Threesome

New Dawn First day of a new chapter, philosophical reflections emulate like four seasons, reminiscing hearts whose voices are no longer heard, yet I feel their spirits close. I ponder who will find me and who will I lose - life is limited for many reasons. Mind and Muse War One misty morning when my muse was missing and I misplaced my pen, I felt regret unable to portray how clementine hues ignited baby blue skies. Battle between muse and mind bled rage onto the page - heart whispered amen. Ignorant Bloodshed If only hypocrites could see their reflection in the mirror of tangibility. Would their fingers still point like deceitful swords, ready for bloodshed? Love to hate, hate to love, blindfolds the eyes on the path to tranquillity.
Examples for Threesome contest: Write three lines. No syllable count. Can rhyme, or you do not have to use rhyme. Important part is to keep it on three lines. Does not have to be three sentences. I've done three examples, but you only need to write one stanza of three lines. Mine is a triple threesome! Silent One 4 January 2020

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Date: 2/14/2020 9:30:00 AM
Good mergence of the different pieces, I like this. The words are strong too. Good luck.:) Sunita UPD
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Date: 1/19/2020 6:06:00 PM
Awesome creation. Intriguing form... I think I'd like to try it.... As your three are quite inspiring.... A fav...
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Date: 1/13/2020 5:53:00 PM
Wonderful examples. I think it is a winning three way tie.
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Date: 1/13/2020 3:43:00 AM
It's awesome and I love the third one..
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Date: 1/12/2020 12:33:00 AM
You give three wonderful examples. New Dawn is my fav. Blessings SO, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:40:00 AM
Thank you.. mine also..
Date: 1/9/2020 2:48:00 PM
Amazing poetry, full of sincerity, and I love the message wrapped within...Like always... Brilliant.
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:41:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/7/2020 9:56:00 AM
This was incredible. I enjoyed every line. Ann
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:41:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/6/2020 10:14:00 PM
Three great ones. S1 are you not going to attempt to make the ku-duet a recognized form? I really think you should.
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:42:00 AM
I do not think they will, so no point really.. always appreciate your support... an angel of the soup.. thank you.
Date: 1/6/2020 5:59:00 AM
Nice example as well as standing on their own poetry podiums! Unable to describe what you are seeing...ohhh, how i fight with that often! New Dawn - all of it touched me. I am faving this!! Happy New Year, my friend!
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:36:00 AM
Thank you.. I think that one was my fave also..
Date: 1/5/2020 11:54:00 PM
Great examples for your contest Si, I love the first one.....Maria Hugs
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:36:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/5/2020 11:22:00 PM
Splendid triple threesomes! You really are one of the greatest poets on this site, Silent:-)
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:36:00 AM
Thanks.. but i am not worthy of such praise..
Date: 1/5/2020 8:34:00 PM
A great threesome Silent, beautifully done
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:35:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/5/2020 8:15:00 PM
Thanks for these... exemplifying what your contest requires midst their reflective offerings. God bless you.
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:35:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/5/2020 3:03:00 PM
oh, glad to see it does not have to be three complete sentences. That is one reason I came to see these. Also I enjoyed reading all three. I liked the middle one the best of all. that was really great imagery and also the message of the third one was superb especially in these perilous times.
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2020 6:35:00 AM
Thank you.. its nice to see, which ones people preferred...
Date: 1/5/2020 2:11:00 PM
- Your three examples are fantastic ... brilliant !!! - ("the list" is high ... maybe too high for me :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:31:00 PM
Thank you.. I am sure you would do a brilliant one for this..
Date: 1/5/2020 2:03:00 PM
Excellent, Silent One...a fave.
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:31:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 1/5/2020 10:47:00 AM
All three examples appeal to reason and offer food for thought, S-1. Well done. Regards // paul
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:32:00 PM
Thank you.. Glad you liked them.. You should give it a try.
Date: 1/5/2020 8:08:00 AM
Great examples, S.O.
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:32:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 1/5/2020 4:16:00 AM
A "New Dawn"! awakening to so many a beauty and a blessing! avoiding even to think of Life limitations.. relishing in so thrilling and inspiring the wage of rage between muse and mind! A heart roaring his Love.. making fingers tremble and eyes opened to paths of Light and peace.. Awesome! Silent One, I salute the depth of your mind.. the flow of your heart and the mastery of your pen! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:33:00 PM
You are so kind, there were just examples for the contest, but i appreciate your kind words..
Date: 1/4/2020 7:20:00 PM
great examples....i love them all... :) hugs
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Sandra..
Date: 1/4/2020 5:13:00 PM
Great example. Lots to muse upon.
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:33:00 PM
Thanks..
Date: 1/4/2020 2:54:00 PM
Interesting S. O. I'll have to consult my muse. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:33:00 PM
Good idea... thanks..
Date: 1/4/2020 1:54:00 PM
Wonderful example, Silent One..
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 1/4/2020 11:44:00 AM
Silent, all three poems are wonderful and you have inspired me !
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thank you.. I'm sure you will write a great one..
Date: 1/4/2020 8:49:00 AM
Hi Silent, You have set the bar high, this is a good example for your contest. I’m gonna to try to come up with something. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2020 2:41:00 PM
I'm sure you will...Thanks

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