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Threesome - Sunrise

Sunrise In the presence of glory, dormant hearts and ignorant minds awake in unison. Innately commanding the world’s stage, demanding an audience of new horizons your silent symphony elegantly echoes the dawn of eternity. 9th January 2020 Threesome contest – sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 7/13/2020 11:19:00 PM
As the saying goes "Stop and smell the flowers" or in this case, watch the sunrise. The world is an amazing place and you capture that well in your write.
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Lovely write again! Hope you are well! A long absence from poetry soup.
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Date: 4/18/2020 8:20:00 AM
I see congrats are in order. Well done.
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Date: 1/14/2020 6:17:00 PM
Congratulations for the win.
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Date: 1/14/2020 2:07:00 PM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/14/2020 4:47:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/13/2020 10:08:00 AM
Well spoken for a silent symphony. Congrats.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/14/2020 4:46:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/13/2020 1:48:00 AM
"Your silent symphony elegantly echoes the dawn of eternity" - so lavish. Gorgeous win, Midnight. ~ John
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/13/2020 6:28:00 AM
Thank you John.
Date: 1/12/2020 12:31:00 PM
Stunning, :) Congratulations on your win in Silent One’s “Threesome”. Hugs Eve
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/13/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 1/12/2020 11:06:00 AM
Wow..Is it the same sunrise I'm seeing everyday..Sheer poetry.. Congrats on your win..
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/13/2020 6:27:00 AM
I appreciate that Jenish. Thank you.
Date: 1/12/2020 9:26:00 AM
Amazing write MA I knew this would be at the top, congrats on a great write and win!
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/13/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thanks John.
Date: 1/12/2020 7:21:00 AM
A ode to sunrise, and that last line sums it up perfectly.. silent things are always stunning and influence so much poetic thought... great three lines.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/13/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. I am honoured. Thanks for the challenge.
Date: 1/10/2020 10:08:00 AM
I’m on the same page as Tommy. If it was your intent, I like this SonRise. Hugs Rick.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/10/2020 5:32:00 PM
Lol...It wasn't my intent, although now reading it again I can see how you two got that from it. Nah, it's just merely what I see with the rising of the sun :) Thanks Richard.
Date: 1/8/2020 9:23:00 PM
This is stunning writing I know this will do well, Silent (and I) love sprinkles of alliteration, this was exquisite! I have to fave this wow!
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/9/2020 2:31:00 PM
Thanks John. I like to have a lot more words to get my point across so I thought I'd take this challenge. I am humbled by your wow and the fave. Thanks so much.
Date: 1/8/2020 9:15:00 PM
Lovely, Midnight.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/9/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thanks, Line.

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