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Three Senryu Poems

White Doves White doves your signals Lifting the dawn upon their wings In my damned nights. Love's Tracks If stars gave one chance I'd lie beside your wish To find holy love's tracks. Shaping Redemtion Time ends, you hold me As moon swirls round our bodies Shaping redemtion's red.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/24/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Valeria. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:46:00 AM
Many Congrats Valeria for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:01:00 AM
Beautiful Senryu's, dear Valeria. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:12:00 PM
Cool win, valeria. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:28:00 PM
Very passionate write!Congrats on your win valeria---kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:07:00 PM
congratulatiosn on your win valeria
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:12:00 AM
Hello Valeria, Congratulations on your win Valeria, I enjoyed reading this one very much As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:50:00 PM
Valeria, you wrote these three entries quite descriptively well. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with them.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:33:00 PM
Congratulations Valeria on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, valeria
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:47:00 PM
Congrats Valeria on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support ...
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:21:00 PM
Nice multiple senryu on different themes, valeria. Good luck in the contest.
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