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Three Notes

Three notes Of hard music Roared in my head The first time I saw her. Three notes of steel To underline hers strength. The same three notes Three notes of gold Sweetly sounded In my head Later on When she kissed me To underline Hers gleaming sweetness. Three diamond notes Create a sublime music in my head Just now When we have been long wed. To underline strength and gleaming sweetness Of the woman of my life.

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Date: 1/31/2023 1:13:00 AM
I just enjoyed; superb lovely poem
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:55:00 PM
How romantic!! If only I could actually hear those notes. Great write!
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Mario De Paz
Date: 3/7/2014 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Heather for coming and commenting so positively. I am sure you can hear those notes since you have a sweet thought...
Date: 2/7/2014 2:29:00 PM
- I enjoyed reading your lovely poem - well written! - Have a great weekend, Mario. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mario De Paz
Date: 3/7/2014 9:20:00 AM
Excuse me Anne Lise. In this period I am so busy and I forgot to give answer to your lovely comment. Thank you!

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