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Three Kisses

Your filtered eyes meet lonely lips We pass this morn, two sailing ships Soft and broken words to follow Your first kiss to me now hallow My stress match needs a lip release This day at last has come to cease My daughter adds a smile surprise This work day ends in her blue eyes The sun then died and went to bed Our blanket hangs by single thread a Life so busy love escapes Our room enclosed by lonely drapes My love I sow into this kiss Mending our love for life of bliss

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2018 5:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve

Just James
Date: 9/12/2018 2:38:00 AM

Thank you Eve

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/12/2018 5:57:00 PM

Just James, such a beautifully expressed personal view into enduring the daily grind and its effects on love and family. Excellent poetry! Congratulations on your wonderful win.. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Just James
Date: 9/12/2018 2:38:00 AM

Thank you Susan

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2018 7:33:00 AM

I can sense the personal here, a glimpse into a life of family, work and love, that it may not be perfect but it is strong enough to endure when times are not as they once were.

Just James
Date: 7/11/2018 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Casarah for your insightful words..:) The daily grind yes..

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/8/2018 7:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!

Just James
Date: 7/11/2018 7:54:00 AM

thank you Susan

John Hamilton

Date: 7/8/2018 12:50:00 PM

Congrats on a fine sonnet and placement James!

Just James
Date: 7/11/2018 7:55:00 AM

thank you John