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Three Keys

~One key Two keys Three keys~ B R E A K my walls of passion as we turn doorknob number o n e, young love started a romantic destiny meant for only you and I. So many months turning into years of traveling and creating fun, for the vows we swore released a lifelong commitment... ...we do sanctify. “Sneak in quietly the babe's asleep…” as we turn doorknob number t w o, our family has begun and life is hectic with the cooing and the crying. Although it seems chaotic at times deep down we always knew, this was the dream we always hoped for without hesitant denying. “Welcome son! Please walk right in!” as we turn doorknob number t h r e e, “oh get over here sweet Ella and tell me all about your school day! I’m so delighted to catch up and laugh, and see your beautiful family, there’s nothing like being grandparents, oh how I wish you could stay.” So many keys are made to fit so many doors into our adoring futures, from youth grown into a loving marriage, and now grandparents are we. Our souls connected the first time we glanced; became sewn on sutures, to think this life was born behind closed doors using three simple k e y s.
Date Written: July 15, 2016 Rhyme Scheme: ABAB-CDCD-EFEF-GHGH Original Contest Entered: Three Keys Contest Date Judged: July 20, 2016 For Contest: I Got Zero, Nothing, Nada- 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings

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Date: 8/6/2016 6:32:00 AM
Laura, congrats on writing such a lovely poem and winning the contest! Jesse
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/6/2016 12:26:00 PM
thank you Jesse :)-luloo
Date: 8/4/2016 10:39:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 8:33:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 8/4/2016 1:36:00 PM
I'm delighted to share the top step with you Luloo - loved this the first time I read it:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 8:31:00 AM
thank you lady :)-luloo
Date: 8/4/2016 4:13:00 AM
Good stuff. Congratulations.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/4/2016 12:33:00 PM
thank you Kai :)-luloo
Date: 8/3/2016 11:28:00 PM
So wonderful a thought for this poem...I love it and making my favorite. Congrats Laura on your 1st place win. :) Sunita
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/4/2016 12:33:00 PM
many thanks sweet Sunita :)-luloo
Date: 8/3/2016 10:25:00 PM
Love your approach to the prompt. Congratulations on your win, Luloo! Janice
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/4/2016 12:33:00 PM
thank you Janice :)-luloo
Date: 7/16/2016 7:36:00 PM
No key less entry...the story of life...well done my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/16/2016 8:18:00 PM
thank you Winged Warrior :)-luloo
Date: 7/16/2016 4:28:00 PM
Excellently done about three keys. Good luck with a 7 in the contest my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/16/2016 8:18:00 PM
BL, thank you very much :)-luloo
Date: 7/16/2016 4:25:00 PM
soupmail on your contest rules
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/16/2016 8:17:00 PM
hey lady, I just responded a few hours ago :) hope it helps it is a very challenging contest, but my last few were so lazy easy I wanted to share this form I came up with....be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 7/16/2016 3:55:00 PM
Oh Laura......this poem has opened the heart. And each key fits a different time of life. How creative you are !!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/16/2016 8:15:00 PM
awww thank you Carrie! You are a sweetheart:) Be blessed lady :)-luloo
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/16/2016 3:57:00 PM
And I'm back again to thank you so much for your generous offerings to show our poems from 2015.....I'm so pleased you liked my own. (It is true to a time in my family's life). Thank you!
Date: 7/16/2016 3:06:00 PM
I love the way you addressed this theme, Luloo. So beautifully written, and your last stanza says it all. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/16/2016 8:14:00 PM
thank you Sandra very much! :)-luloo
Date: 7/15/2016 5:11:00 PM
very unique and thinking outside the box with the keys of generations! I love this.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/16/2016 2:24:00 PM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 7/15/2016 4:03:00 PM
seems you have found the perfect key for family life LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/15/2016 4:06:00 PM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo

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