Three Is Enough:

Only room for three! Myself and I, and me too, No more me and you! /|\

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/23/2016 4:04:00 PM

Ouch. The truth hurts, Rick. That was a gut punch and you didn't hold back. Excellent poem w/a powerful message. Love this one a whole lot, my poetic friend. Much love to you.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/12/2016 7:47:00 PM

If my me left me who should I be with..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2016 7:56:00 PM

CUTE, Rick!!! it's senryu!

White Wolf
Date: 12/9/2016 7:59:00 PM

Is that because it's not nature based? The syllables are 5/7/5.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/9/2016 12:43:00 PM

someday, there will be a space for someone worth your while, rick.. nice one!..huggs

White Wolf
Date: 12/9/2016 12:46:00 PM

Oh, what a lovely thing to say, thank you, Nette /|\

Tim Smith

Date: 12/9/2016 11:48:00 AM

Three's company...hope you take turns taking out the trash

Tim Smith
Date: 12/9/2016 12:00:00 PM

lol

White Wolf
Date: 12/9/2016 11:53:00 AM

Thanks for reminding me, I'll tell myself to take the bins out tomorrow! Unless I do it first of course! lol /|\

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/9/2016 11:09:00 AM

Is this a narcicisstic ménage a trois? Well done. I've written, not a haiku, but a short poem about Me, Myself and I. BTW thanks for pointing out my spelling mistake. It's still early morning for me. Best to you in your writing endeavers and thank you for stopping by. / M

White Wolf
Date: 12/9/2016 11:19:00 AM

What is the title of the poem you were talking about? I couldn't find it! /|\

White Wolf
Date: 12/9/2016 11:14:00 AM

Just ME attempting humour! I might check out your short poem now, Maurice! And thank you too /|\