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Three Davids I Have Known

David the First In an old photo I’m being bathed by a boy looking quite bashful. . . the first young man to hold me - my mother’s only brother. David Bunker My first love note came from junior high’s smartest guy - shy freckled David, future doctor of acclaim. For one month I had his heart. David Williams Our poet at Soup - like the one of Bible times whose psalms soothed a king - touches us with modern verse and blesses us with friendship. (As I went to enter the contest, I noticed I was supposed to write of only one famous David. Well, I don't know the famous ones like i know these three. In a way, my middle one is famous. I just googled him and saw he was on the short list of nominations for a prestigioius award naming most honorary of all students who ever graduated from my high school! and of course, our own David Williams is famous at SOUP!!)

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Date: 9/30/2018 7:28:00 PM
The first stanza was incredibly sweet. The second stanza was so clever. The third was a lovely tribute. I believe he stopped posting a couple of months before I started. I'm surprised you didn't receive a bunch of comments from guys named David on the soup. Well done Andrea, yours David (aka Ralph)
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Date: 11/16/2012 12:14:00 PM
I REMBER SEEING THIS COMPOTISION GOOD WRITE WITH NICE INSIGHT X DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 11/15/2012 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Andrea. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.
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Date: 11/13/2012 9:01:00 AM
This is a great and touching dedication poem my dear friend Andrea! Congratulations on your well-deserved "super win"! love always, LG
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Date: 11/13/2012 8:35:00 AM
great write my friend Andrea :) Our David will like this poem of yours. Congratulations on your grand win. Love, Maria
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Date: 11/13/2012 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andy, trust you to have three lol, well done xx
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:00:00 PM
Andrea. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:50:00 PM
Nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:08:00 PM
Excellent and splendid piece,Andrea.Congratulations on your win...And thanks for stopping by my poems....
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Date: 11/1/2012 3:33:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem. Soup mail for you
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Date: 10/30/2012 10:29:00 PM
Well you bare your heart for all three Davids. I love this and I am sure David will too, seeing how you hold him dear among the others who are precious to you. Best wishes and thanks always for your sweet words and for visiting. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:35:00 PM
people that touch our lives, and leave an inprint on our skies, that lasts :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 12:34:00 PM
Nice bio. and tribute too - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/29/2012 12:06:00 PM
What a nice set of tankas! I am awaiting Hurricane Sandy today. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/28/2012 12:18:00 PM
Nicely done Andrea! The 2nd David had to be smart to capture you for a month : ) ....Our David will pleased! Hugs
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Date: 10/28/2012 11:26:00 AM
Hey! No one, like NOBODY, can know just one David. This infamous David likes your poem mucho. LOve daver
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Date: 10/28/2012 8:53:00 AM
I love the the way you did this Andrea....nicely done....best wishes...Hugs
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Date: 10/28/2012 7:44:00 AM
SUPERBLY CRAFTED DEDCATION TO OUR DAVID AT PS WITH DAVIDS THAT HAVE IMPACTED YOUR OWN LIFE LUV .. ORIGINAL AND DIFFERENT FOR THE CONTEST WITH YOUR SPECIAL FLARE .. MUCH SUCCESS MY FRIEND .. THINK TITLE IS TO BE: A DAVID FOR DAVID ..
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Date: 10/28/2012 3:51:00 AM
heart,heart,heart, thats all i can think about when i read this, good luck in the contest...
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Date: 10/28/2012 12:35:00 AM
Very good approach to do the contest with Davids of your life!Good set of tanka.
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Date: 10/27/2012 8:37:00 PM
Andrea, you are a sweetheart.. taking your own Davids into this poem... even the middle one... David will enjoy this poem... good luck in the contest...pd...
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Date: 10/27/2012 6:09:00 PM
A very enjoyable set of tanka about the Davids in your life. You are a gifted poet and I al.ways find pleasure at your aite
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Joann Grisetti
Date: 10/27/2012 6:09:00 PM
your site.
Date: 10/27/2012 5:43:00 PM
Dang Andrea, you beat me to writing about David of bible fame, and I am sure I couldn't do better, not in such short form, but I love what you have written about each. My poem 'Poet' was written with David Williams in mind.
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Date: 10/27/2012 4:53:00 PM
Oh good job.! Love it. BG
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Date: 10/27/2012 4:08:00 PM
i like your three davids very much - you've captured just enough of each one to really describe him so well.
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